Bit of a slog this weekend and still didn;t finish completely - but there should be a start to epilogue version of chapter 2 now avaialable for testing
See forum post here
Anyone with time to kill who is willing to give me feedback of any kind I'd be grateful. Especially those who were fans of chapter 1 and gave me the support there - you're the ones I'm doing chapter 2 for, so if I've lost my aim, or there's something not right about this compared to chapter 1 and you want to have your say - let me know. It's hard to critique your own work when you're so close to it, and I'm worried I've lost some of the original momentum and feel - so any help appreciated
Now, I need to sleep...
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