Chapter 2 uploaded. Should be on the Vault soon
Been a knackering few days bug hunting / fixing.
Thanks so much to all who helped - and any that hadn;t got back to me in time, thanks, and I'll still welcome any comments
I'm going to be pretty busy with work next few days so was keen to get it out now.
Now I need to rest, maybe play the Red Prison, which I've been waiting to do, before all the bug reports flood in!
For all those who supported me withChapter 1, I hope I've done your support justice!
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